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France X Reader: Pub!

You were trying to find the nearest pub, so you could get drunk. You had a bad day at work and you needed to forget about it.

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You soon saw a pub called Downtown...... Funny. You entered the pub, walked towards the bar and sat down. You ask for a large beer.

"Are you sure, miss?" You nodded and grabbed the drink.

After a while you heard the door slam open, you turned around and saw three guys..... Posing? One with blond hair, one with brown and one with silver? You sighed and turn back to your drink 'Great! Gay guys!' You heard people on both sides of you. You looked to your left to see the brown haired guy, and looked to your right to see the blond guy and you looked up to see silver hair guy behind you. You sighed again looking at you drink. Suddenly you felt two arms around you, and one on your head.

"Hohohoho we have a lonely women here, no?"

'That blond guy sounds French.' "What do you guys want? The gay bar is down the street." One of then laughed

"Kesesese Oh no, we are in to girls. That's why we're here."

'GOD leave me alone!' you thought. "Fine! But don't bother me"

"Awww but you look so lonely" The brown haired guy said; he sounded Spanish

"I like being alone." You drank your beer until the one behind you turned your head to his face was only inches from your own.

"No one likes being alone. here, let me show a good time" You punched him face, and he fell on the ground holding his bleeding nose. "AAAHHH GOD DAMMIT WOMAN!"

You drank your beer again "I said leave me alone." He stood up and out of NOWHERE, He had two band-aids on his nose that formed an 'x' shape. 'WHEN DID HE DO THAT!?'

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After an hour you found out their names; Francis - Blond hair, Gilbert - Silver hair and Antonio - brown hair.

All they did was flirt with all the girls. You laughed when Gilbert got punched in the face again by one of the girl's boyfriend. They sometimes talked to you without flirting, which was good. You had a lot in common with Francis who was ALWAYS flirting with you and that's why you kept banging him on the head.

'I think I like him.....'

"Please stop doing that Mademoiselle _____________"

You looked at him and smirked "Stop flirting with me then." Francis sat next to you at the bar, you turn to him and he looked upset.

"What?" he held your hand

"Why are you upset?"

"W-What!? I'm not upset, I'm fine." He looked away from you.

'Is he blushing?' You thought.

"Then why are crying?" You put your hand on your cheek and felt tears on your face.

"Oh! I-I don't kn....!" Then all of the sudden Francis kissed you and wiped away your tears. You pushed him away and stood up so fast that your stool fell.

"Wh-What do you think you're doing?!" All eyes were on you In the pub.

"I was ju....."
You shook you head, grabbed your bag and left the pub.

~~~

"Fucking French guy! Who does he think he is?" You said, storming home. You heard footsteps behind you. 'Great, they're following me. Maybe he wants to apologize to me about what happened at the pub.' Then a hand went around your body and dragged you off.

"WHAT THE HELL!" You looked up to see three guys, one of them was holding you, and another was holding a bat.

"Oh look! She's trying to talk back to us"

You tried to get away but the guy was holding too tightly.

"Let's show her what we can do." Tears were running down your face.

"LET GO, LET GO RIGHT NOW! HEEELLLPPPP SOMEONE!" You screamed.

He put his hand over your mouth "Ssshhh you don't want us getting into trouble, do you?" He whispered in your ear

'Please some h-help'

Then you heard screaming behind you and the guy turned around; you were so happy to see the three men from the pub. One guy was on the ground and the other was held by the collar by Antonio

"You should let her go now" The guy was trying to run off with you until Francis kicked the guy in the face and fell to the ground.

"I learned that from yo...."He began. You ran up to Francis and gave him a hug.

"Thank you! Thank you!" You felt him put his arms around you

"I'm just glad you're OK"

"Jet'aime" You said and buried your face in Francis's chest. You looked up at him and saw him stunned.

He kissed you. He put his arms around your waist and you put your arms around his neck.

"Jet'aime, ____________" He gave you another hug and you were about to kiss him again until you heard Gilbert.

"Woooooowwwww, GO FRANCIS!" He shouted. You stuck your tongue at him and gave Francis another kiss.


Yes this was a Great day after all....


THE END!
Hope you like it! =)

THANK YOU SOOOO MUCH FOR HELPING ME - :iconnanathefurret: <--- GO SEE HER NOW!

Request from :iconblackwhiteyellowblue:


Madameoiselle - Miss
Je t'aime - I love you




(Story by me)

(Hetalia is not) aawwww =(
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:iconrarmonsterrrr:
RARmonsterrrr Featured By Owner Aug 17, 2012
*sparkles* French french, I love french~ 'tis my favourite laanguage!
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animekath Featured By Owner Aug 20, 2012   Digital Artist
haha thank you~! >7<
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RARmonsterrrr Featured By Owner Sep 26, 2012
:3 Nya~

GO French! *cheers*
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Ghastly-Cupcake Featured By Owner Apr 3, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
EPIC.
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animekath Featured By Owner Apr 4, 2012   Digital Artist
Thank you~! ^^
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Ghastly-Cupcake Featured By Owner Apr 4, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
You're welcome
:D
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X-Izaya-Orihara-X Featured By Owner Apr 3, 2012
Actually it's Je'taime not Jet'aime :3 just wanted to let you know~ it's a cute story! I was actually expecting America to show up at the end to make it funnier and say 'Ill get those bad guys!' then there's none! XD
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animekath Featured By Owner Apr 3, 2012   Digital Artist
ahh thank you, sorry~! ^^

haha yes, that would be funny! =D
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X-Izaya-Orihara-X Featured By Owner Apr 3, 2012
You're welcome! And don't be sorry! :3 just wanted to help you out!

That's what I was expecting XD
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cathylikeseverything Featured By Owner Mar 7, 2012  Student Digital Artist
:iconchibifranceplz:
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animekath Featured By Owner Mar 8, 2012   Digital Artist
XD hohoho~!
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Blue-Demon-Hybrid Featured By Owner Jan 28, 2012
:iconiloveitplz: I never thought I'd want to hug Francis so much as I do now. X3
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animekath Featured By Owner Jan 29, 2012   Digital Artist
Yes~! XD
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sasusakuforever99 Featured By Owner Nov 5, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Awesome! It was suu cuteee~ ♥

Wonderful job, my friend!

/faves
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animekath Featured By Owner Nov 5, 2011   Digital Artist
Thank you so much! :hug:
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sasusakuforever99 Featured By Owner Jan 28, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
No prob!
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Yarj Featured By Owner Nov 4, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Ahhh it's yours! That's why I like it so much!
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animekath Featured By Owner Nov 4, 2011   Digital Artist
*Cry's*

T-Thank you S-So much! I LOVE YOUUU~! :hug:
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Yarj Featured By Owner Nov 5, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Oh, come on! What have I said?

Me when I was reading that: "Oh, a France one! Let's look... hey, it's beautiful! The writing is perfect and the summary is so involving! I absolutely have to watch the writer! Who... oh, *facepalm* it's Cate. Obvious.
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animekath Featured By Owner Nov 5, 2011   Digital Artist
Hahaha Thank you! ^^

Your story's are great as well. X3
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PrussiaDC Featured By Owner Oct 19, 2011
:iconiloveitplz:
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animekath Featured By Owner Oct 20, 2011   Digital Artist
tehe Thank you! ^^
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PrussiaDC Featured By Owner Oct 20, 2011
np!
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time-is-toxic Featured By Owner Oct 7, 2011  Student General Artist
This is awesome c: France deserves more love :I
I really liked reading this~ c: Nice job~
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animekath Featured By Owner Oct 7, 2011   Digital Artist
R-Really!?

I find this quiet bad. =_=;
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time-is-toxic Featured By Owner Oct 8, 2011  Student General Artist
Yeah! c:
I thought it was nice ^^
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animefan5228 Featured By Owner Sep 12, 2011
awesome story!!
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animekath Featured By Owner Sep 13, 2011   Digital Artist
thank you =)
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:iconblackwhiteyellowblue:
:3 you cheered my day up. I want Mr. Francis to come and really save me from the bad guys. *huggles you/francis/and this story*
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animekath Featured By Owner Sep 11, 2011   Digital Artist
haha no problem! You should thank :iconnanathefurret: she helped me with my spelling and all. Thank you :hug: =D
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:iconblackwhiteyellowblue:
I will. i will. Thank you for writing this.
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333hf333 Featured By Owner Sep 11, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
It would work better if you left a double space inbetween text.

This is an example of the bad putting together.

All they did was flirt with all the girls, You laughed when Gilbert got punched In the face again by one of the girls boyfriend. They sometime's talked to you with out flirting 'Which was good' you mostly had In common with Francis who was ALL WAYS flirting with you and that's why you banged him on the head. "Please stop doing that Madameoiselle _____________" you looked at him and smirked "stop flirting with me then"

All they did was flirt with all the girls. You laughed when Gilbert got punched in the face, yet again, by one of the girl's boyfriend. They sometimes talked to you without flirting, 'Which was good' you mostly had In common with Francis who kept on flirting with you, so you eventually hit him on the head.

"Please stop doing that, Madameoiselle _____________."

You looked at him and smirked. "Stop flirting with me then."

Do you see how much easier it is to read in the second one?

The part in italica was because I couldn't make any sense of it. And your grammar is worse than your spelling. And I think ot's a bit rushed when one second you hate France and then you're cuddling him. If someone saved me from a gang of creepsters, I would greatly respect them, but if they kept making unwanted advances, I'd not like them much. I used to write like that, and believe me, when you improve grammar and spelling and plots, I think you'd be a brilliant author.
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animekath Featured By Owner Sep 11, 2011   Digital Artist
my spelling is bad because I have Dyslexia and my computer is pretty bad (so don't be mad, I know) hehe Sorry =)
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333hf333 Featured By Owner Sep 11, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Just because you have Dyslekia and a bad computer doesn't mean you can't make a good plot. I've got aspergers, but it doesn't stop me from having friends who just manage to be normal!
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animekath Featured By Owner Sep 11, 2011   Digital Artist
sorry =)
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333hf333 Featured By Owner Sep 12, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
I didn't mean for it to come out as snappy.
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animekath Featured By Owner Sep 12, 2011   Digital Artist
it's Ok, I don't mind. (I'm at college and redoing English for 3 years so that will give me time to get better)I read some of your stuff and there really good =D
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333hf333 Featured By Owner Sep 12, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you! I hope you didn't mind all my Bionicle obbsession stuff.
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animekath Featured By Owner Sep 12, 2011   Digital Artist
it's Ok, I forgive you. HUG! :hug:
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Zea900 Featured By Owner Sep 11, 2011  Student Writer
Um...can I correct you on your French? Manquer is miss as in to miss the bus or miss a person. Miss as in adressing a lady is Madameoiselle. Hope I cleared that up for you. :)
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animekath Featured By Owner Sep 11, 2011   Digital Artist
*Facepalm* DAME! I'm sorry, I don't know any France hahaha (I tried) =D
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Zea900 Featured By Owner Sep 11, 2011  Student Writer
That's fine! :)
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ScarletSynthesia Featured By Owner Sep 11, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
W00T! ;3
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animekath Featured By Owner Sep 11, 2011   Digital Artist
hehe thanks =D
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